Hi Bloggers,
For the past few weeks in Literacy, we had a student-teacher and we were learning about children books. We learnt about children books authors like Margaret Mahy, Dr Suess, and Lynley Dodd. We read a book from each of the authors and broke it down, talking about the themes and language features. Some of the most common language features were rhyming and repetition. After we learnt about these books and authors, we were challenged to write and illustrate a children's book of our own. I wrote mine about Celery, and I tried to incorporate repetition as much as possible. Here it is:
Hi Hana,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading through your children's book, this same problem seems to happen a lot in my home, and not just from me. Was this part of the point? to make it relatable?
This book is really good and fun to read, I love this pictures and the way you set up the pages, it goes really well. Using repetition as part of your book makes it much more fun to read. On be half of you I give the teachers permission to publish this book! your welcome.
-India-Grace
Hey India-Grace,
DeleteThanks for the comment! Yes I did try to make it more relatable, I'm glad it was noticeable. Bye:)